good stuff! the face really adds something eh. =) I'm looking at this and the first post you did of the painting, and I kinda like certain parts of the BG you have done before. mainly, the pink part was kinda nice as it was. In a way, what you had before looks clearer even if the contrast isn't as high. I could tell that it's a floor. something seems lost in translation in this final piece. the dark parts blend into each other a bit too much imo. the figure is well done! I like the perspective!
I think Thea makes a good point with the floor. Perhaps adding rain drops on the outfit would help the floor look more wet and less like glass, which was the impression I was getting when I compared the first and the last. Still, the dark colouring helps with the mood and giving the idea of it having just rained. Nice perspective and I like the addition of the face inside the mask.
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good stuff! the face really adds something eh. =) I'm looking at this and the first post you did of the painting, and I kinda like certain parts of the BG you have done before. mainly, the pink part was kinda nice as it was. In a way, what you had before looks clearer even if the contrast isn't as high. I could tell that it's a floor. something seems lost in translation in this final piece. the dark parts blend into each other a bit too much imo. the figure is well done! I like the perspective!
I think Thea makes a good point with the floor. Perhaps adding rain drops on the outfit would help the floor look more wet and less like glass, which was the impression I was getting when I compared the first and the last. Still, the dark colouring helps with the mood and giving the idea of it having just rained. Nice perspective and I like the addition of the face inside the mask.
Thanks for the input guys.
Cool.
I think the brush strokes on the figure, especially around the face, could have benefited from some more refinement.
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