Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Post_36

2 comments:

Renae said...

hey forgot to say love the way this one turned out! cept I kinda prefer the previous sky (with the vertical streaks). But the two people look awesome! =)

Phil said...

Eh yo, In this piece i also found you took some steps back. Thats why i felt the need to post.

IMO the first concept on post_31 was friggin sick. It had atmospheric depth and the composition worked well. the revisions there after removed the left hand building and the broken wall. I felt that broken wall added some nice rhythm. The grass in the first one also helped too.

Another thing you can try bringing back is the variety of trees.

well damn, in general i liked the first one. haha.

peace!