I really like the colors you're exploring with here. It gives off more of a bold layout then your previous saturated versions. Now for negative critism. I still feel the red drapery on the elephant is a bit too vibrant. It almost tries to fight with the rocks that are more dominant on the left side. If you tone it down just a notch or 2, I think it wouldn't be as distracting at first glance in my opinion. The background is a nice touch, I think it perfectly illustrates depth in a way that you used saturated colors and less detail. However, objects that are closer should have more detail. The hay stack on the wagon can have a few light hairs of hay on the left side. I think that's all you need to describe the hay stack. To me, it kinda looks a bit blobbish. Also, include a shadow for the guy standing next to the wagon. He aint a ghost is he?!
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I really like the colors you're exploring with here. It gives off more of a bold layout then your previous saturated versions. Now for negative critism. I still feel the red drapery on the elephant is a bit too vibrant. It almost tries to fight with the rocks that are more dominant on the left side. If you tone it down just a notch or 2, I think it wouldn't be as distracting at first glance in my opinion. The background is a nice touch, I think it perfectly illustrates depth in a way that you used saturated colors and less detail. However, objects that are closer should have more detail. The hay stack on the wagon can have a few light hairs of hay on the left side. I think that's all you need to describe the hay stack. To me, it kinda looks a bit blobbish. Also, include a shadow for the guy standing next to the wagon. He aint a ghost is he?!
Thanks for the input Duyum.
I expect continuous feedback from you from now on!!!111oneone
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